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新新英语作文30天——第十七天：篇章训练

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新新英语作文30天——第三天：选词的两大诀窍
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答案：This is no doubt that people will continue to want to be able to see wild animals in captivity.

解析：这句话是出现在最后一段，往往也是结论段的对客观事实的陈述，属于基本情况范畴，故为本题的答案。它揭示了人们对于动物园中动物的依赖之情，在文章的正文部分作者已将动物园存在的利弊一一列举出来，那么要想延续人们囚禁野生动物的愿望关键在何处呢，这就要看本段的主题句了。The main idea in the introduction paragraph:

答案：Zoos have both positive and negative aspects.

解析：这句带有评论性的语言很显然就是这部分的主要内容，甚至可以看作是本文的中心内容。在此之后的内容是对这句话的解释说明。The main idea in the conclusion paragraph:

答案：However, people should make sure that the animals that live in a zoo and give us so much pleasure have a good life themselves. Truth needs no color.真理不需要打扮。

解析：最后一段的最后部分作者带有很大的主观性，这也是多数文章在之前提出问题、分析问题，之后解决问题并用以结束文章的方法。在此作者给出了建设性建议，在继续让动物们生活在动物园的同时，人类应保证享受动物乐趣的同时使动物们有良好的生存条件。

这是一篇思路清晰、叙述简洁的文章。在文中作者分别阐述了动物园对人类及动物的利弊，我们应通过阅读这篇文章学会对一事物进行正、反两方面对比的写法。

Passage 2.

请阅读以下笔记，然后写一篇有关澳大利亚和新西兰这两个国家的比较和对比的文章。

Aspects Australia New Zealand Land form two islands, two islands Location South Pacific South PacificLinks with Britain Colony & British Commonwealth. Colony & British Commonwealth Language-English , EnglishWar experience, fight as ANZACS in WWI and WWII, fight as ANZACS in WWI and WWIISheep industry, large sheep population and wool industry large sheep population and wool industryPopulation about 20,000,000 about 4,500,000area large, not as large as Australiasdesert large no

答案与解析：

Every why has a wherefore.

凡事必有因。 Australia and New Zealand are alike in many ways. They both consist of two islands, and are similarly located in the South Pacific. Britain made colonies of both countries, and they have membership of the British Commonwealth in common. English is the official language of the two countries. Australian and New Zealand soldiers fought together as the ANZACS (Australia and New Zealand Army Corps) in World War I and II. Both countries have large sheep populations, and the wool industry is very important to the economies of each.

However, there are also some differences between the two countries. Australias population of about twenty million is considerably larger than that of New Zealand which is approximately four and a half million. Australias land area is also much greater than New Zealands. A large part of Australias interior is desert but that is not the case in New Zealand.

分析：文章分为两部分，其中第一部分在给出材料的基础上把两个地区相同的地方集中起来进行描述。用“A and B are alike in many ways.” 总领全段，在行文之中使用similarly, both之类的词语将两个地区自然地联系起来进行比较，这样一来即表达了准确的意思，又做到句式简洁、多变化。在第二部分中，即文章的第二段，集中描述了两地的不同之处。用However作为承上启下的连接，首句中的also更显得文章不失连贯性。不同点方面的比较也可通过不同句式表达，例如文中出现的比较句，和最后一句——前面肯定而后面使用否定语气的句式等。

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