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4)从出题形式上看,在平稳中逐渐趋于多样化。写作题目易于理解,无论以文字的形式还是以图表、图画的形式出现都浅显易懂。考生不会因题目中出现生词或难以理解的短语而影响正常发挥。
从多年辅导和阅卷的情况看,考生英语作文的成绩并不理想,比如,2004年的500份考卷抽样分析的结果是:成绩好的(17分以上)约为12%;比较好的(15分左右)为约30%;差的(10分以下)约为35%;很差的(少于8分)约为 23%。如果考生想在较短的时间内对考研英语写作有所认识、有所突破,首先应该了解考研英语写作常见题型,并了解各种题型的写作技巧,然后进行有针对性的练习,并且研读相关范文。
为此,我们将考研英语写作中已经出现过的和尚未出现的(漏网之鱼,嘿!)题型基本分为如下八类:图画式、图表式、提纲式、情景式、摘要式、书信式、主题句式、关键词式。在今后近一个月中,我们将从基础入手,并辅以专项训练,还会介绍各种题型的写作要点和分析方法,叫一声“芝麻开门”,打开一个“宝库”;然后,抽调该类型当年的高分实考样卷,对“原汁原味”的材料加以点评(偶或兼评低分样卷);紧接着就是我们特别奉献的“友情提示”,即与考试准备有关的“小提小醒”,力求万无一失;最后,归纳总结出“秘密武器”式的最最经典的惯用表达、句式结构等,以“他山之石”,攻“作文之玉”。
三、精评2004年考研作文
多少年来,大家一直都是在当学生写作文,今天就换一个角色,当一回老师判作文,这可绝非仅仅寻求感觉的刺激!最重要的是,我们要用上面讲的高分作文的评判标准和差作文的劣迹表现,分别对2004年漫画考题的高、低分实考样卷进行评判打分,然后“对症下药”、“量体裁衣”,才有出奇的效果啊!
As every thread of gold is valuable, so every moment of time.
一寸光阴一寸金。
2004年考研作文实例:
Directions:
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
终点又是新起点
1) describe the drawing,
2) interpret its meaning, and
3) support your view with example.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
高分作文:
The cartoon depicts a vivid picture in which an athlete, dripping sweat, is rushing to the end. Obviously, he wins the match, but this is not the key message conveyed by the picture. The most striking feature of the drawing is that the same line is marked as both “the start” and “the end”, which indicates that although the athlete came to the finish, a new race is waiting for him.
The idea conveyed by the cartoon is apparent: the end is a new start. It is widely accepted that we should not be satisfied with the present achievement, for nowadays new challenges and competition never stop. The market economy and competitive society drives many people studying hard for higher academic degrees, some of them even seeking the opportunities to study abroad. We should spare no efforts improving ourselves, master high technology and professional skills. Then we can make use of it to devote ourselves to society.
Take my father as an example. He was denied higher education for historical reasons. But by selfstudy he became a technician in a factory. Many people thought he was content. But he never stopped studying. He took courses of law in his spare time. Later he became a lawyer. “The finishing point is just a new starting point”, he said to me. (219 words)
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