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一般的结构是:表明正面态度+进行好处列举+展望美好未来。即一句话肯定这个现象好,欢迎这个现象,比如2002年作文最后一段先说我们的确应该促进文化交流,然后两句话说明好处是传播中国文化,扬我国威,同时吸收外国文化的长处,改我文化之弊,最后两句展望,只有这样,我们国家才能够永远屹立在世界民族之林什么的。试看2002年一篇18分范文的结尾段:
As Chinese citizens, we should respect our own national culture and learn useful things from the cultures of different nations, which will enable us to make great progress in many ways. I believe a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we make every effort to promote cultural development both nationally and internationally.
这段话第一句说明了我们对本国文化和外来文化应该持有的态度,又提到了文化交流的好处和作用,最后一句是带条件的展望。此段写得稍嫌结构不清,试写如下:
Personally,I embrace frequent well-intentioned cultural exchanges. Not only is such communication conducive to spreading the very essence of our Chinese culture worldwide, it also presents before us the flower of the alien cultures and thus compels us to reexamine the dregs of our culture in confrontation with the foreign ones. Therefore, I believe consistent efforts should be made to enhance international cultural chains. We look forward to the day when people all over the world can benefit from cultural contacts and enjoy a kaleidoscopic cultural life.
总而言之,图画作文不出这五种段落,同学们写作时,注意审题,看指令让你写的是哪三段的组合,然后进行拼接组图,写作时牢记写作原则:基础比较好,以15分为目标的同学,在不犯错误的情况下尽可能追求复杂;基础比较薄弱,以及格分为目标的同学,以不犯错误为目的,尽可能追求简单。
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