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Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.指的是永远成功
倒装并列句在段落末尾写,增加气势,第二段结尾很重要,不要晚节不保。倒装句在结尾补充再好不过。此句很万能,表明只有该积极事物让我们永远成功;
三:5—6句话,承上启下总结上文,两点建议,展望美好未来
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair.
From 。。。。。。。。。。承上启下, 引起下文, 多达二十五个单词的总结句 表明无论做大事小事,难事容易事,都需要积极事物支持我们。
It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the coming goals.
建议措施的总起句子, 引起下文,被动句子很有风采.
On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream.
结构很清晰,sensible 表明建议很理性, 从反方面再谈很辨证.
However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
这个闪光的万能句多达25个单词,强调实践的重要性.而且还有谚语,表明建议用于实践。
话题二:打败自我,不断改正自身缺陷吸收别人长处,完善自我,自信面对人生;
1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others
Defeating ourselves------------fight with our defects-------------------perfect ourselves------confident--------perseverant----------------have a better understanding of ourselves
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息 profoundly indicates that defeating oneself rather than the other competitors is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. You have to fight with your own shortcoming and perfect yourself as much as possible. It is defeating ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we defeat ourselves, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many people who do not have faith in themselves always lose the match. Only by defeating ourselves can they make full use of their advantages and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to have a better understanding of oneself. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make yourself more competitive in the society. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more perseverant. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
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